一、北京冬奥 1.
(2022·北京西城·高三期末)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英文网站将新增“Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics”版块,现正征集栏目设置建议。你想参加此次活动,请给负责人Mr. Smith写信,内容包括: 1. 你最想设置的一个栏目及其内容; 2. 设置该栏目的理由。 注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior from Hongxing Middle School. I am glad that there will be a new column about Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics in our school website. In terms of this column, I have higher expectation to Olympic athletes who are from different countries.
In order to introduce athletes, we can focus on not only their gold medals, but also their inspiring stories. Most of students always adore athletes and consider them as models because of their
tremendous spirit. The spirit teaches us not to give up forever, and encourages us not to be afraid of frustration. I think these mottos
can help seniors build up confidence and succeed in college entrance examination.
Thanks for giving me a chance to express my idea. Looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份,为你校英文网站即将新增的“Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics”栏目设置提供建议,并给负责人Mr. Smith写信。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→elated
集中:focus on→concentrate on 把……当作:consider…as→regard…as 机会:chance→opportunity 2.句式拓展 同义句转换
原句:Most of students always adore athletes and consider them as models because of their tremendous spirit.
拓展句:Because athletes have tremendous spirit, most of students always adore them and consider them as models. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am glad that there will be a new column about Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics in our school website.(运用了that引导的宾语从句。)
[高分句型2] In terms of this column, I have higher expectation to Olympic athletes who are from different countries.(运用who引导的定语从句。)
二、亲子关系 2.
(黑龙江省大兴安岭实验中学2021-2022学年高三上学期期末考试英语试题)假如你是李华,了解到有些同学很苦恼自己父母总在网上晒他/她的照片,你向
学校的英语校报投稿,对此事发表自己的观点。 内容包括:1.支持或反对“晒娃照片”; 2.用2至3个理由支撑你的观点。 3.帮助他们想出解决问题的方法。 注意:1.词数100左右
2.第一句已给出(不计入总词数)
While it is common for parents to post their children’s photos online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it. __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文 支持:
While it is common for parents to post their children’s photos online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it. As for me, it’s something acceptable.
In my opinion, posting children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known. As a result, he is likely to have more chances to be successful in the future. It will also be easier for parents to communicate with their friends, for they have more to share with each other. Besides, it’s a way to strengthen an online social circle and connect with people we don’t know before. Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children’s photos, it’s not necessary to be too cautious about it. We should have confidence in our society. 反对:
While it’s common for parents to post their children’s photos
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online nowadays, some students around me are anxious about it. I hold the same view as them. In my opinion, it is not always the smartest or safest thing to do so. What parents view as delightful photos may be interpreted differently by others and give a false image of what the child is really like. Besides, some individuals or companies steal children’s images and use them in advertisements or other commercial activities. Moreover, it can result in them being re-shared and altered by other online users without permission, which may end up damaging their school status or future career prospects. In short, have a good talk with your parents to make sure they are cautious about it. 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生向学校的英语校报投稿,对有些同学很苦恼自己父母总在网上晒他/她的照片一事发表自己的观点。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
在我看来:in my opinion→from my perspective 因此:as a result→therefore 而且:besides→moreover 增强:strengthen→enhance 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, posting children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known.
拓展句:In my opinion, that parents post children’s photos online is beneficial to people and makes a child better known. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】It will also be easier for parents to communicate with their friends, for they have more to share with each other.(运用了for引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children’s photos, it’s not necessary to be too cautious about it.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
三、新冠相关
3.(2021·江苏·盐城市伍佑中学高三开学考试)假定你是李华,由于新冠病毒德尔塔(novel coronavirus-Delta)爆发, 你校决定推迟开学,请你给回国度假的留学生Jack 写封邮件,告知此事。内容包括: 1.告知推迟开学; 2.介绍疫情;
3.开学日期另行通知。 注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Dear Jack,
I am so sorry to inform you that we'll have to postpone the start of school this term due to the outbreak of novel coronavirus Delta during this summer vacation.
You must have known that the new virus-Delta is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is getting from bad to worse. Many people have been infected and died. It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home. So in order to defeat this infectious disease, we've decided to delay the start of school. The school will not begin until the outbreak is controlled and over. The specific time will be announced later. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给回国度假的留学生Jack 写封邮件,告知由于新冠病毒德尔塔(novel coronavirus-Delta)爆发, 学校决定推迟开学
这件事。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
由于:due to=because of
决定做某事:decide to do sth.=be determined to do sth. 开始:begin→start 宣布:announce→declare 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:Many people have been infected and died.
拓展句:Many people have been infected and died, which is heartbreaking. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]
You must have known that the new virus-Delta is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is getting from bad to worse.(that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2]
It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home.(it为形式主语,that引导主语从句)
四、太空探索
4.(2022·江苏盐城·高一期末)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神州十三号航天员太空授课,请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员,内容包括: 1. 感谢宇航员们的精彩授课; 2. 观看太空授课后的收获和感想; 3. 祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。 注意:
1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear astronauts,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文: Dear astronauts,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on December 9, 2021.
After watching the hour-long televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science. What’s more, I’m more
enthusiastic about our country’s space exploration program. I’m so proud of our country’s advances in science that I’m determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland. Wish you a triumphant return. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在和同学一起观看了神州十三号航天员太空授课后发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
感激:gratitude→appreciation 极好的:marvelous→excellent 而且:what’s more→moreover 参与:be engaged in→get involved in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous
science lecture inside the space station on December 9, 2021. 拓展句:I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your
marvelous science lecture that you delivered inside the space station on December 9, 2021. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】What’s more, I’m more enthusiastic about our country’s space exploration program.(运用了what’s more的语篇衔接词)
【高分句型2】I’m so proud of our country’s advances in science that I’m determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.(运用了so...that...的结果状语从句,意思是“如此……以至于……”)
五、双减政策 5.
(2022·山东临沭·高三期末)“双减”,即有效减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。自从国家正式出台相关文件后引来了各方的关注和讨论。一时间,学生和家长对即将到来轻松的学业反而无所适从。请你根据下面提示,就实施“双减”政策后学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活写一篇短文。
要求:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's really a wonderful news that the policy of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of their time after school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:
It's really a wonderful news that the policy of double-lightening the burden has been carried out. However, students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of their time after school. First of all, make various plans and complete the contents based on the plan alone. For example, read a variety of books, and constantly expand your reading in order to make up for the lack of reading. Besides, develop your new interest in some subjects which are unfamiliar to you. Some new areas will broaden your horizons and increase your knowledge. Last but not least, participate in various sports activities and promote physical and mental health through physical exercise. I think if you want to study better, you should have a good body first.
In a word , the policy of double-lightening the burden can help us plan our life better. 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生就实施“双减”政策后学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活写一篇短文。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in 变阔;变宽:broaden→enrich
各种各样:all kinds of→varieties of 总之:in summary→in a word 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:Last but not least, participate in various sports activities and promote physical and mental health through physical exercise. 拓展句:Last but not least, participate in various sports activities , promoting physical and mental health through physical exercise. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Besides, develop your new interest in some subjects which are unfamiliar to you.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] I think if you want to study better, you should have a good body first.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
六、传统文化
6.(广东省东莞市2021-2022学年高三上学期期末质量检查英语试题)为弘扬中华传统文化,上周五你校举办了“国潮文化节”。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.活动影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
China-Chic Cultural Festival
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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:
China-Chic Cultural Festival
Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground. As is announced, the term \"China-Chic\" characterizes the rise of China's native fashion trends. It has expanded the concept of \"Made in China,\" which is usually regarded as the assurance of the quality of products. The festival was made up of many kinds of meaningful activities, including fashion show, Hanfu design and so on, which were all aimed at raising the students’ sense of national pride. Having fired our passion, the event became a success.
After the festival, all the students were proud of being a Chinese and living in such a peaceful country. 【分析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生对学校上周五举办的“国潮文化节”,为校英文报
写一篇报道。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
弘扬:develop and expand→promote
由……组成:be made up of → consisted of 各种各样的:many kinds of→varieties of 活动:activities→ events 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground. 拓展句:Last Friday, in order to develop and expand traditional culture, the China-Chic Cultural Festival was held on our school playground., which had an important impact on us. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]
It has expanded the concept of \"Made in China,\" which is usually regarded as the assurance of the quality of products. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]
Having fired our passion, the event became a success.(运用了现在分词作状语)
七、可持续向未来
7.(2021·重庆巴蜀中学高三阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校学生会准备开展“低碳生活,从我做起”的活动,现面向全校征集活动方案。请你给学生会主席写信提出建议,要点包括: 1.写信目的; 2.具体建议; 3.希望建议被采纳。
注意:1.写作词数应为80词左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:低碳生活 a low-carbon life Dear President,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文: Dear President,
Knowing that a campaign aimed at promoting a low-carbon life will be launched on our campus, I am more than delighted to contribute my ideas. My suggestions are as follows.
First of all, there will be an exhibition featuring the beauty of nature and the negative effects of human activities. Besides, a class meeting centered on how to live a low-carbon life will be held, where students can brainstorm various ways to go green in our daily life. More importantly, students are encouraged to practice green living, like using cloth bags instead of plastic bags and taking public transportation.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【分析】
这是一篇应用文。学生会准备开展“低碳生活,从我做起”的征文活动,要求考生写信给学生会主席提相关方面的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted 建议:advice→suggestion 影响:influence→effect
聚焦,以……为中心:focused on→centered on 各种各样的:a variety of→various 而非,而不是:rather than→instead of
把……考虑在内:take...into account→take...into consideration 2.句型拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:First of all, there will be an exhibition featuring the beauty of nature and the negative effects of human activities.
拓展句:First of all, an exhibition, which features the beauty of nature and the negative effects of human activities, will be held. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]Knowing that a campaign aimed at promoting a low-carbon life will be launched on our campus, I am more than delighted to contribute my ideas. (运用了现在分词作状语,和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Besides, a class meeting centered on how to live a low-carbon life will be held, where students can brainstorm various ways to go green in our daily life. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
八、学榜样向未来 8.
(2021·上海市吴淞中学高三期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
2021年10月充满着希望,我们看到了二度出征太空的女宇航员,本届诺贝尔奖获得者出炉,电影《长津湖》(Battle of Chosin Reservoir)重现的抗美援朝战斗事迹……,各行各业的古今优秀人物为人类发展做出了积极贡献,是我们青年人学习的榜样,也是一些人的偶像。当然,我们青年人的偶像也可能是生活中的平凡之人。偶像的力量无穷,请谈谈你的偶像,及他或她之于你的力量。
内容必须包括: 1. 简要介绍你的偶像;
2. 以例子说明你的偶像身上的某些优秀品质; 3. 谈谈你从偶像身上学到了什么。 【答案】例文:
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is my friend Tom.
He is very kind and caring. He is willing to help others. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I didn’t do well in studying, so he not only helped me with every subject, but also told me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Tom’s help, I made great progress and I thanked him very much.
I think I’m lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others. 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生写一篇文章介绍自己的偶像及从偶像身上学到了什么。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
擅长……:do well in…→be good at…
在某人的帮助下:with sb’s help →with the help of sb. 幸运的:lucky→fortunate
尽某人最大努力做某事:do one’s best to do sth.→try one’s best to do sth. 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:He is very kind and caring.
拓展句:He is so kind and caring that we all like him. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams.(运用了so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)
九、”数字化”撞上”老龄化” 9.
((上海押题)2021届上海市高三英语秋考押题密卷04)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三张华,在某报纸上看到一则报道,寒冬腊月,一名老人因不会使用手机扫描通信大数据行程码,被公交车司机呵斥要求其下车。互联网的发展便利人们生活的同时,却让很多老年人无所适从,就如何让银发族跨越“数字化”鸿沟的问题报社征集现广大读者的建议。请你写一封信给该报。在信中,你必须:
1. 你对老年人“数字化”鸿沟的看法;
2. 就如何帮助老年人跨越“数字化”鸿沟提出建议。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:To whom it may concern,
Reading the report that a senior citizen was declined from riding bus due to being unable to display his health codes with smartphone, I’m so touched that I’m writing to voice my opinions.
While the majority of the populace enjoys the convenience of digital technologies, however, senior citizens are experiencing greater and greater difficulties with the digital divide. This is rather disappointing. Measures should be taken to bridge the digital divide for senior citizens.
To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens. Many of them have little knowledge of new technologies. Therefor we’d better hire specialized and patient coaches, select easy-to-understand teaching materials, and help the senior citizens to become literate in technology. Then, we should launch more senior-friendly products. For example, the taxi-hailing platform of Shanghai has enabled “one button hail” and “big letter mode” so that seniors with poor eyesight can send their location information with a single click. More importantly, senior citizens are not passively taking in help from others. We must encourage them to act together, to overcome fear of new technologies, and stick to
the belief of “never too old to learn”.
In a nutshell, to help senior citizens bridge the digital divide, we need joint efforts from the governments, companies, and the whole society. Hope that my suggestions would be taken into consideration. Yours, Zhang Hua 【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求考生写一封信给该报就如何让银发族跨越“数字化”鸿沟的问题提出自己的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
表达我的看法:express my opinions →voice my opinions 不懂:know little of →have little knowledge of 接受帮助:accept help→ take in help
被考虑: be considered→ be taken into consideration 2.句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens. Many of them have little knowledge of new technologies.
拓展句:To begin with, we need to strengthen education and training for senior citizens, many of whom have little knowledge of new technologies. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Reading the report that a senior citizen was declined from riding bus due to being unable to display his health codes with smartphone, I’m so touched that I’m writing to voice my opinions. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] For example, the taxi-hailing platform of Shanghai has enabled “one button hail” and “big letter mode” so that seniors with poor eyesight can send their location information with a single click. (运用了so that引导的目的状语)
十、北京冬奥与中国元素
10.(2021·辽宁·大连市一0三中学高二期中)假定你是李华,你的美国留学生朋友Jack来信说他所在的学校要开办很多弘扬中国优秀传统文化的俱乐部,比如中国书法,武术,剪纸,厨艺,太极,中医等,他想征询你的意见。请你根据下面的要点提示,给他回复一封电子邮件:
1. 你所推荐的俱乐部; 2. 推荐理由; 3. 你的期待。 注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。 Dear Jack,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文: Dear Jack,
I am very delighted to know that you want to start a club to carry forward the excellent traditional Chinese culture. Personally, I recommend a Chinese calligraphy club. And my reasons are as follows. To start, in our nation, calligraphy has always been considered as one of the most significant arts, which will help foreigners to know more about Chinese culture. Second, unlike doing Taichi which needs a big space and specific costumes, practicing calligraphy can be easy to operate. All it asks is a table with the Four Treasures of the Study, which refer to brush, inkstick, paper and inkstone. Finally, practicing calligraphy is a good way to improve students’ perseverance, for it needs patience to practice.
In a word, starting a calligraphy club is definitely advantageous. And I highly recommend starting a calligraphy club.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国留学生朋友Jack写信,给他推荐弘扬中国优秀传统文化的俱乐部。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
个人认为:in my opinion →personally 被看作:be regarded as→be considered as 绝对:surely→definitely 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:And I highly recommend starting a calligraphy club.
拓展句:That is why I highly recommend starting a calligraphy club. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am very delighted to know that you want to start a club to carry forward the excellent traditional Chinese culture.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]To start, in our nation, calligraphy has always been considered as one of the most significant arts, which will help foreigners to know more about Chinese culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
十一、电动自行车
11.(2020·江苏镇江·高二期中)《江苏省电动自行车管理条例》已于2020年7月1日起正式实施。请你写一封倡议书,呼吁市民在骑电动自行车时佩戴头盔。 【写作内容】
1.骑行者安全意识薄弱,车祸频发; 2.佩戴头盔的好处:
3.呼吁市民在骑电动车时佩戴头盔.
【写作要求】 1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已给出,不计入总词数: 4.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear fellow citizens,
Standing Committee of Jiangsu Provincial People's Congress has recently issued a regulation that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle. ______________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Dear fellow citizens,
Standing Committee of Jiangsu Provincial People’s Congress has recently issued a regulation that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular. As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one. Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life. Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen. I’m appealing to all electric bicycle riders to abide by the regulation and make every endeavor to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,呼吁市民在骑电动自行车时
佩戴头盔。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。 结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:
1.骑行者安全意识薄弱,车祸频发; 2.佩戴头盔的好处:
3.呼吁市民在骑电动车时佩戴头盔。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
pose…to…; in particular; lack of; awareness; protect…from…; appeal to; in the first place 第三步:连词成句
1.It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular.
2.As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one.
3.Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life.
4.Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen.
5.I’m appealing to all electric bicycle riders to abide by the regulation and make every endeavor to put safety in the first place by wearing helmets.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表因果关系: therefore 2.表转折关系:but
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It is a sad but common phenomenon that traffic accidents happen frequently, which poses a great threat to people’s safety, electric bicycle riders in particular.句中使用了that引导同位语从句,对phenomenon进行解释;which引导非限制定语从句。
[高分句型2] Therefore, top priority should be given to wearing helmets if we are to guarantee our life.句中使用了if引导条件状语从句。
[高分句型3] Helmets can undoubtedly protect us from possible blow when accidents happen.句中使用了when引导时间状语从句。
十二、北京冬残奥会与雪容融 12.
(2022·山东·及第中学高一开学考试)假如你是中学生李华,随着冬奥开幕,冰墩墩和雪容融上了热搜。你的外国朋友Michael写信询问你北京冬奥会吉祥物的情况,能否帮他购买一个吉祥物礼品。你电邮告知这里的境况。 内容包括:
1. 介绍吉祥物“冰墩墩”和”雪容融”; 2. 告知现在“冰墩墩”缺货,但已订购; 3. 希望来华游玩。
参考词汇与相关文化:“冰墩墩”(Bing Dwen Dwen以熊猫为原型,“墩墩”代表健康、活泼。)和”雪容融”(Shuey Rhon Rhon以灯笼为原型,代表着收获、温暖和光明,“雪容融”这个名字则代表宽容和融合。)
注意事项 1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文:Dear Michael,
Here are our Olympic and Paralymic logos, Bing Dwen Dwen and Shuey Rhon Rhon.
Bing Dwen Dwen, whose name is a combination of several meanings in the Chinese language, with \"Bing\" the Chinese word for \"ice\and \"Dwen Dwen\" meaning stout and lively. The Paralympic mascot, Shuey Rhon Rhon, is the choice of the lantern, which is a cultural symbol associated with harvest, celebration, prosperity and brightness. The name Shuey Rhon Rhonl expresses the well wishes that there could be more embrace and understanding for the people with disability. BingDwenDwen, the marketable Olympic mascot, is temporarily out of stock, but it is on order.
Welcome to China for a tour at your convenience! 【解析】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给外国朋友Michael写信告知北京冬奥会吉祥物的情况。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
选择:choice→option
与……有关:be associated with→be related to 拥抱:embrace→hug
暂时地:temporarily→momentarily 2.句式拓展 同义句转换
原句:BingDwenDwen, the marketable Olympic mascot, is temporarily out of stock, but it is on order.
拓展句:BingDwenDwen, which is the marketable Olympic mascot, is
temporarily out of stock, but it is on order. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]
Bing Dwen Dwen, whose name is a combination of several meanings in the Chinese language, with \"Bing\" the Chinese word for \"ice\and \"Dwen Dwen\" meaning stout and lively.(whose引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]
The name Shuey Rhon Rhonl expresses the well wishes that there could be more embrace and understanding for the people with disability.(that引导同位语从句)
十三、推荐信
13.(2022·江苏南通·一模)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学,学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件:内容包括: 1.推荐大学; 2.你的理由; 3.你的期待。
注意:1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Dear Chris,
I am writing to express my warmest welcome to you. I'm sure you will have the most unforgettable college experience in China.
Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll
international students in China. With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses,wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world. Moreover, it is located in Jiangsu, which will attract you with its beautiful scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true. If you have further questions, please let me know.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris想到中国读大学,学习并体验中国文化。请给他回一封电子邮件。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
各种各样的:rich variety of→all kinds of→all sorts of 充足的:abundant→enough
全世界:all over the world→throughout the world 另外,此外:moreover→furthermore →in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:With its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world.
拓展句:As it has its profound culture, high-quality instruction, rich variety of courses, wide-range majors and abundant research opportunities, Nanjing University attracts students and scholars from all over the world. 【点睛】
[高分句型1] Given your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Nanjing University, which is one of the first to enroll international students in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] If you have further questions, please let me know. (运用
了if引导的条件状语从句)
十四、人机关系
14.(2021·上海·复旦附中模拟预测)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
疫情防控期间,越来越多的人尝试了网上买菜软件 (online grocery app),有些人觉得这些软件给生活带来了便利,平台上的各种优惠券也很有吸引力,另一些人觉得这些便利助长了用户的惰性,而且也会导致用户运动量减少,你的家庭有没有使用过上述app?你觉得用这些app买菜,是利大于弊还是弊大于利?请结合生活实例展开论述
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【答案】例文:More and more people are using online grocery apps during the epidemic and it has become an important way to buy vegetables. However, online shopping has both advantages and disadvantages.
The advantages of these online grocery apps are quite obvious. First of all, it's convenient to buy vegetables online because we can surf the internet at any time anywhere; Besides. There is no doubt that coupons on the platform are also appealing. However, its
disadvantages can’t be ignored. Staring at the screen is harmful to our eyes. Worse still, we don’t have many opportunities to go out, which can also cause us to exercise less.
As for me, I think its advantages overweigh its disadvantages. Just click on the screen and I can get the fresh vegetables timely, which brings great convenience to my life.I have been using this online grocery app for over two years. It is of great help to me. 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生介绍网上买菜软件的利与弊,并给出自己的观点。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
方便的:advantageous → convenient 吸引人的:attractive → appealing 更糟糕的是:what’s worse→ worse still, 首先:first→ first of all 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:More and more people are using online grocery apps during the epidemic and it has become an important way to buy vegetables. 拓展句:More and more people are using online grocery apps during the epidemic which has become an important way to buy vegetables. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】Worse still, we don’t have many opportunities to go out, which can also cause us to exercise less.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As for me, I think its advantages overweigh its disadvantages.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
十五、当代青年与烦恼
15.(上海市徐汇中学2021-2022学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高中学生李明,最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇关于青少年心理状态的文章。文中提出与20年前的青少年相比,如今的青少年更加不快乐。你对此话题很感兴趣,请写一封信给该报社的编辑,表达你的想法,内容须包括:
1. 导致该现象的原因 2. 相应的建议
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:Dear Editor,
I am Li Ming, a student in Ming qi Middle School. Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier. I am writing to express my opinion about this phenomenon. Many people think today’s teenagers should be happier than before. However, that’s not the case. First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely. Secondly, nowadays, teenagers suffer from too much pressure of study, which makes them easier to be depressed.
Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take many activities to form harmonious interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents also need to pay more attention to their children’s mental health. As we all know, good listening can always show respect, promote understanding and make things better. I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved. Yours sincerely , Li Ming 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某英语杂志的编辑写封信,表达你对青少年不开心这一现象的看法以及建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
鼓励:encourage→inspire/motivate 此外:besides → what’s more 采取措施:take action→ take measures 关注:pay attention to →focus on 2.句式拓展 合并简单句
原句:First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. It makes them feel lonely.
拓展句:First of all, today’s teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others, which makes them feel lonely. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】Recently, I read an article about the mental state of teenagers which mentioned that compared to the teenagers 20 years ago, today’s teenagers are unhappier.(运用了which引导的定语从句和非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】I am convinced that with our joint efforts, the situation will be gradually improved.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
十六、疫情下的网课 16.
(2022·浙江·台州市外国语学校高一阶段练习)假定你是李华,由于疫情(epidemic),你的美国朋友Tom正在上网课,他在邮件中向你询问如何提高上网课的效率。请你用英语给他写封回信,就如何提高网课效率提些建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:One Possible Version Dear Tom,
Knowing that you need to take online courses because of the pandemic, I’m writing to offer some useful suggestions on how to improve your study efficiency.
To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. In addition, it is a good idea to make a study schedule, so that you can make better use of your time. Last but not least, why not keep a frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face. The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the pandemic. Yours, LiHua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因疫情而在上网课的美国朋友Tom写信,就如何提高网课效率提些建议。 【详解】
1.词汇积累
因为:because of →owing to 应该:be supposed to →ought to 集中于:focus on→concentrate on
更好地利用:make better use of→take full advantage of 2.句式拓展 同义句转换
原句:The more you communicate with them, the less problem you will have, which can save a lot of time.
拓展句:If you communicate more with them, you will have less problem, which can save a lot of time. 【点睛】
[高分句型1]To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which may distract your attention all the time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily. (运用了动名词做主语)
十七、2022年杭州亚运会 17.
(2022·海南·模拟预测)假定你是光明中学的李华,得知第 19届亚运会将于2022 年9月在杭州举办,目前正在招募志愿者。请你给组委会写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 提出申请;2. 个人优势;3. 表达希望。 注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】例文:Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a boy from Guangming Middle School. I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer in the coming 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou. I believe I'm an ideal candidate. With an outgoing and cheerful personality, I can get along well with people. What's more, I can communicate freely with foreigners. Most importantly, I know a lot about other Asian countries and I'm eager to spread Chinese culture. I hope I can be given a chance and I will do a great job. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给组委会写一封邮件,申请成为第 19届亚运会的志愿者。 【详解】 1.词汇积累
完美的:ideal→perfect 此外:what’s more→besides 机会:chance→ opportunity
做得好:do a great job→do a good job 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:With an outgoing and cheerful personality, I can get along well with people.
拓展句:Because I have an outgoing and cheerful personality, I can get along well with people. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】I'm Li Hua, a boy from Guangming Middle School.(运用了同位语)
【高分句型2】I hope I can be given a chance and I will do a great job.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
十八、志愿服务让青春“闪光”
18.(2021·上海市松江二中高二期中)Directions: Write an English
composition in 150-180 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
校园报本期开设了志愿者故事专栏,正在向同学们征稿,请分享你的志愿者经历或故事,并谈谈收获与感悟。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文:
Everyone has an unforgettable experience. My most memorable was the first time to volunteer at the Happiness Nursing Home last summer holiday.
As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were! Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly. 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生分享自己的志愿者经历或故事,并谈谈收获与感悟。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
假期:holiday →vacation 到达:arrive at → get to/reach 例如:such as →for example 照顾:care for→ look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句
原句:I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.
拓展句:I got up early because I was so excited that I couldn’t sleep. 【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
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